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Va rog frumos sa mi corectati si mie, in caz ca este ceva gresit, aceasta compunere:
The phone rang in the middle of the night..., it was my boyfriend. He told me that he is in the front of my house, with his car, and he want to go at club, with me.
I run to my mother to ask her if i can go, but obvious she didn t allow me to leave the house because next day i had an exam. I prayed her for 15 minutes but for nithing.
I gone in my room.
I saw the window and i had an ideea, i can leave the house in secret, and that s what i done.
I climbed the window and i run to my boyfriend's car.
Next day i gone to the exam.
After 2 months, the results was showed and i take the exam with congratulations.

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DANA89ZE
ai cateva greseli...din cate vad, mai mult legate de timpuri si verbe, dar si cateva de exprimare

The phone rang in the middle of the night..., it was my boyfriend. He told me that he WAS in front of my house, with his car, and he wanted to go to the club with me.
I RAN to my mother to ask her if I COULD go, but obviously, she didn' t allow me to leave the house because next day I had an exam. I BEGGED her for 15 minutes but for nothing.
I WENT in my room.
I saw the window and I had an idea, I COULD leave the house in secret, and that's what I DID.
I climbed out the window and I ran to my boyfriend's car.
The next day I WENT to the exam.
After 2 months, the results showed and I PASSED the exam with FLYING COLOURS. (asta-i expresia in engleza care se foloseste pt a trece un examen cu felicitari, cu nota mare etc. congratulations se foloseste cand oferi felicitari cuiva pt ceva)

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